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PostSubject: Post your written lyrics, and poetry here!   Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:32 pm

But please be sure they are originals and not stolen. Plagiarism is looked down upon.

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PostSubject: Life Within Life.   Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:47 pm

This is an older written few verses, definitely not my best work but felt like posting something, its gotta real message in it so check it.



[VerseI Ewhite]
Living in the streets far from the rights,
Discriminational leaks...to rise, to fight.
Little kids roam the streets dreaming the light.
Mixed in thugs and thiefs, stealing cars in the night.
As the pale blue sky, turns to the darkness of nigh.
The younger grow older, seperating the wrong from righ.
Barely any chance to survive when your goal plane crashed-
Under the bright red light of the devils lair, stalking you.
As the world grows grier only safty is with God in prayer.
But half of these younglings are sex drugged players.
Boys grow up into cars and action figures-
Baseball games- lifes no easier.
Hit the age of a teenager, lifes flipped backwards.
Filled with hate. The strugglement of anger.
Blinded by sex and drugs and grand theft auto.
Up highjacked with the thugs, but now homies no love.
Slumped in debt now living in the streets.
Begging for money, for drugs they seek.
Weak are they. they're blinded today.
the same drum beat, played day after day.


[VerseII Ewhite]
It's the life within life and theres no gaurentee,
If youre gonna go far, if your gonna succeed.
Just look in general at the world where we live.
half the population was dead to begin.
don't judge them today for what they relent to.
Because remember when they fall,
you will die with them too.
Cause as the rich grows richer and gains even more.
Theres half a billion people that fall with the poor.
Cause when you fiddle with cloths and make up cash.
Theres a 3 year old kid whose gettin beat to death.
And when your worried about shit, like care and dates.
Theres a hardworking mother whose getting raped in the streets.
and what the fuck do we do? except deny this fate.
pushing it out of our heads, acting likes its all fake.
What the fuck is wrong with you, when only this do you see.
Actling like shit like this only happens in the movies.



[VerseIII Ewhite]
Kids grow up to face thses problems,
Because the life within life.
Has been beatin and swallowed.
Shown no love, so he sold his soul to the thugs.
now instead of going to heaven, he will burn in the fires of drugs.
But they all think its his choice to make. to get caught up with drugs.
And the murderous takes. but if you look behind the lines,
of this hellish mistake. Youll realize its for his families sake.
He needed the money to keep them alive.
On the line of the judgement but he gave in to survive.
only wanted them to live, so he had to create a new life..


[Verse IV Ewhite]
So listen up before you make the same mistake.
Cause theres another option so you don have to take-
The hard way out. living the shame. Debt grows larger,
as death grows everyday. and never go down to the level of sin,
you will always hit a level, but not as far as within the place of murder.
And the fires of hell, the devil just watches as you suffer for sell-
of your own soul. could have amounted to a higher role.
Cause the easy way out may be the best at the time.
But just remember what happens when you past the line.
no turning back to say goodbye to all.
nothing but fear as you created your downfall.

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PostSubject: Re: Post your written lyrics, and poetry here!   Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:37 pm

Nice, I didn't read it all, but what I did was pretty good, Thumbs up! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Thanks, and I can understand that.   Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:39 pm

It is indeed a long post. But probably not long to people with time on their hands O_o

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PostSubject: Re: Post your written lyrics, and poetry here!   Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:58 pm

Me? Spare time? Naw, lol XD

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PostSubject: Re: Post your written lyrics, and poetry here!   Thu Sep 08, 2011 12:09 am

And here's a little poem I wrote about one of the worst things ever, it's a joke poem, but it's pretty good Wink
(Note: You may not get it if you don't play MindCraft):

Oh how I miss you, how I log for your sweet embrace. I've missed you like a newborn baby misses her mother. Without you my nights seem endless, ongoing,
suffering for near endless times until the sun comes and meets me again, as if an old friend. Without you, nothing is clear, how I long to be in
your sweet embrace again. I shall scour the earth in search of you, even though it is as if I shall not meet you again until death, for death is the
only way I know I'll see you again. I miss you sweet minecraft bed, and one day I shall find you, yet again...

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PostSubject: Re: Post your written lyrics, and poetry here!   Thu Sep 08, 2011 12:25 am

Hahaha good post!

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PostSubject: Raps Path.   Thu Sep 08, 2011 1:36 am

[Ewhite]
nah im not the greatest thing to ever touch the mic,
but atleast im not like you..i didnt fall into the hype.....

building foundations off of bricks,cus these kids when they miss,
hit the backbored and never swish,there dreams just another wish,
lifes eyes are wide open,difrencses between acomplishing and hoping,
got me wondering is this actually living of is this just coping?,
when a revolving door swings is actually considered closed or open?,
cus i need an open door,medicine and coverage for the open sore,
these people they need my help,need to stop thinking about myself,
whats more inportent in this life opertunity to sucseed or wealth?,
what are you in rap for?,just so you can fit it and get daps more?,
or is this your wish,dream,and everyting you need,only want to sucseed,
your only talent that you know that you own?your terrority? your zone?,
the only way you wont wind up sleeping on stone,sorry thats my own,
the fact when someone disrespects you can spit on them back,infact!,
you even watch as other people laugh,honestly its easier then math,
this man i subtract,this skill ill add,this kid to me is a decimal,
in a fractional term he is below half,this is what i call raps path..

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PostSubject: Can't sleep   Thu Sep 08, 2011 1:38 am

This one is called "Can't Sleep". Keep in mind the time period I wrote this I was in a down time. But this got some memories in it that its got meaning to me. check it.


at night when i go to sleep i pray,
i pray to god i dont make another day,
pray that someone sprays with an AK,
hope and wish i dont make it to may,
days get better so people say,
but at night when i put my head down to lay,
i see deaths,i see pain,i see bright lights........

i see fist fights,and see my boy shot,
i see dark nights,and a hardened blood clot,
gone wrong flights,on a 9 11 plot,
death really bites,bodys while they rot,

but not as much as life,for no one sees your pain,
taking every moment strife,writing scripts to feel sain,
slitting my own wrist with a knife,sniffing cocain,
wishing i could forget my life,forget my own name,

put me in a clinic,declare my crazy,
just because suicide,where my thoughts been latly,
going for a ride,please no one save me,
to much pride,and my writing got lazy,

i want to see my dad,hell is calling,
all the memorys we had,i am falling,
wow just so sad,i cant stop balling,
i will pull the trigger now,no more stalling......

the gun jams,and i cry even more,
fuck counting lambs,im tired of being poor,
i just cant sleep,pain inside i cant ignore,
inside hearts weep,rotting at the core,

so i jump off the 4th floor,but i still hear breath, (pause sounds of catching breath)
saw way to much gore,and i just have nothing left,
my ribs feel so sore,god did not grand me death,
fuck he wants more,well i guess ill just take up meth.........

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PostSubject: Re: Post your written lyrics, and poetry here!   Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:39 am

Wow, nice man, that a ton of lyrics man!

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PostSubject: Lets Pretend.   Thu Sep 08, 2011 11:59 am

Now lets pretend the worldIs
different then what it seems
Pretnd that hitler never made
The Jewish people plead
And that racist insults
Were just lost memories
And that life just wasn
So fragile to bleed
Pretend that Richard Chase
Never thought insanely
And that his way of life
Was preaching humanity
Wishing the world
Could always sleep in peace
That the idea of violence
Was never even seen
And lets pretend that Africa
Never witnessed the genocide
And that Gandhis teachings
Were never needed to survive
And lets pretend now
That we didn hide mysteries
And that terriosts ideas
Never impacted our history
The ideas of the children
Always now were seen
Never blocked out
From the truths of reality
Pretend that this world
Was together a society
And the haters and the hated
Always lived in harmony
And pretend the world
Was always at its best
With the organisms it watched
All were highly blessed
And at the times of the worse
The world held strong
Like a molecular structure
All of us were prongs
All of us needed
For this world to survive
Absent from murder, rape
And the cannabilistic strives
Now lets pretend that life
Was never wasted on drugs
That it is was never lost
Trying to fit in with the thugs
And that the world was one
Filled with joy and love
And no one looked back
But stared straight above
And the rule that was golden
Never was created
Due to the fact
That there was never a reason

Now lets pretend the worldIs different then what seems
Pretend that we never lost
Our oppurtunities
Pretned that this world
Wasn ruled by monarcys
And that we people never followed
Our obsecured dreams
And that this place never
Reached its height of insanity
Living its life
With out its moral calamities
And lets just imagine
This world was full of passion
The the idea of murder
Was never a question
Spare the thought of mind
Which chooses the choices u take
Cause reality isnt A place thats for the make
And listen to the elders
The wise and the aged
Because the best lesson in life
Is from the choices that were made
Just pretending our world
Was never gonna die
The idea of the apocolipse
Was never denied
The thoughts of the cripples
Were listened to an equal right
And the ideas of the young
Were brought up to positive design
With the abortions of the young
Forced to blood and murde
rAnd the older ones forced
To a youthinasia torture
Life is too sacredTo be wasted on hatred
And yet this world laughs
At the idea of plagerism
Now lets sit togethe
rPraying, seeing as one
Close your eyes and feelThe natural feeling of stun
And remember the changes
Through the seasons and the years
Cause soon the time will come
When they're a dull place full of tears
And now cover your fears
And just close yours eyes
See the perfect place
And pretend the world had no lies
And when hope seems lost
And the earth is coming still
Search back into your memories
And recite the words I spill
Now with a final pretend
To change the feelings we have
The fear of the Jews
And the evils which it had
And with the pearl harbor attack
And the massures it brought
Lets all hold together
Pretending life was no holocust
But pretending only gets uAs far as a dream
So the only real way to stop
Is to wake this fantasy
And when life disappears
From the face of the earth
Just close your eyes and rememberTo pretend it never hurt

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PostSubject: Fathers Day   Thu Sep 08, 2011 12:01 pm

don't feel like re formating this to line up correctly but its still really good.


[Ewhite]
crying while sitting at church,if theres no day then whats the father worth?,sitting there on sunday and it hurts,i want my father that gave me birth,but thats a topic for another day,for now im speaking to the lord on fathers day,laugh and play the kids do to my dismay,theres no childs play...on fathers day....
tears that sting the eye,im weeping why? cus when i dream i cry,as i scream dad dont leave my side,please think what you leave behind,then im to the funeral where i wanted to speak,but for once my voice was weak,and in these silent nights the noise i seek,cant make it in prison im far to weak,4 brick walls and quiet it here to,lord im no longer lying i fear you,the nights that i thought you had my back,but matter of fact,its sad this track,cus it speaks of the people who left me down,then scream in my mind test me now,look at the cop and say arrest me how,but i speak silently,emotions left me now,but there are happier times then when i awaken,all the cross roads of Miss~taken,but all these wrong thoughts are they for~saken,or for~saton,either way im bored waiting,for someone to help me,but rich dont care about poor like i dont care about wealthy,shit we are living in hell and its burning from the inside stealthy,but i think the lord forgot my name,or forgot to give me fortune and fame,cus King Cobra is much more more then a name,im recyling ive been through the game,a Legacy,a Veteran,the man with heavenly composure that makes these angel wings shoulders,and enough frost in my thoughts alone to make things colder,but i still sleep on my shoulder...

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PostSubject: Currently Recording    Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:20 am

So I've figured out a good way to create songs without writing, so it comes out more natural.
Heres just a few bars from a current project titled "Mind Of An MC"

[Ewhite
Let me tell you what you'll find in the mind of an MC,
Not someone whose main goals to get sign, sold out money.
Naw, but more like thoughts lyrically released free,
Flowin' from the tongue, like a row boat down stream.
With a mind so sharp, so keen, so clean. deserves top chart-
Unlike theses auto-tune abusers like young money cash money.
Actin' as confusers and morphin' listeners to untalented music.
Coverin' up flaws-Get outta here witcha robot yappin jaws,

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PostSubject: Re: Post your written lyrics, and poetry here!   Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:23 am

origin_ewhite wrote:
Now lets pretend the worldIs
different then what it seems
Pretnd that hitler never made
The Jewish people plead
And that racist insults
Were just lost memories
And that life just wasn
So fragile to bleed
Pretend that Richard Chase
Never thought insanely
And that his way of life
Was preaching humanity
Wishing the world
Could always sleep in peace
That the idea of violence
Was never even seen
And lets pretend that Africa
Never witnessed the genocide
And that Gandhis teachings
Were never needed to survive
And lets pretend now
That we didn hide mysteries
And that terriosts ideas
Never impacted our history
The ideas of the children
Always now were seen
Never blocked out
From the truths of reality
Pretend that this world
Was together a society
And the haters and the hated
Always lived in harmony
And pretend the world
Was always at its best
With the organisms it watched
All were highly blessed
And at the times of the worse
The world held strong
Like a molecular structure
All of us were prongs
All of us needed
For this world to survive
Absent from murder, rape
And the cannabilistic strives
Now lets pretend that life
Was never wasted on drugs
That it is was never lost
Trying to fit in with the thugs
And that the world was one
Filled with joy and love
And no one looked back
But stared straight above
And the rule that was golden
Never was created
Due to the fact
That there was never a reason

Now lets pretend the worldIs different then what seems
Pretend that we never lost
Our oppurtunities
Pretned that this world
Wasn ruled by monarcys
And that we people never followed
Our obsecured dreams
And that this place never
Reached its height of insanity
Living its life
With out its moral calamities
And lets just imagine
This world was full of passion
The the idea of murder
Was never a question
Spare the thought of mind
Which chooses the choices u take
Cause reality isnt A place thats for the make
And listen to the elders
The wise and the aged
Because the best lesson in life
Is from the choices that were made
Just pretending our world
Was never gonna die
The idea of the apocolipse
Was never denied
The thoughts of the cripples
Were listened to an equal right
And the ideas of the young
Were brought up to positive design
With the abortions of the young
Forced to blood and murde
rAnd the older ones forced
To a youthinasia torture
Life is too sacredTo be wasted on hatred
And yet this world laughs
At the idea of plagerism
Now lets sit togethe
rPraying, seeing as one
Close your eyes and feelThe natural feeling of stun
And remember the changes
Through the seasons and the years
Cause soon the time will come
When they're a dull place full of tears
And now cover your fears
And just close yours eyes
See the perfect place
And pretend the world had no lies
And when hope seems lost
And the earth is coming still
Search back into your memories
And recite the words I spill
Now with a final pretend
To change the feelings we have
The fear of the Jews
And the evils which it had
And with the pearl harbor attack
And the massures it brought
Lets all hold together
Pretending life was no holocust
But pretending only gets uAs far as a dream
So the only real way to stop
Is to wake this fantasy
And when life disappears
From the face of the earth
Just close your eyes and rememberTo pretend it never hurt

Did you write this? Cause this is really good!

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PostSubject: Re: Post your written lyrics, and poetry here!   Sun Sep 11, 2011 3:26 am

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origin_ewhite wrote:
Now lets pretend the worldIs
different then what it seems
Pretnd that hitler never made
The Jewish people plead
And that racist insults
Were just lost memories
And that life just wasn
So fragile to bleed
Pretend that Richard Chase
Never thought insanely
And that his way of life
Was preaching humanity
Wishing the world
Could always sleep in peace
That the idea of violence
Was never even seen
And lets pretend that Africa
Never witnessed the genocide
And that Gandhis teachings
Were never needed to survive
And lets pretend now
That we didn hide mysteries
And that terriosts ideas
Never impacted our history
The ideas of the children
Always now were seen
Never blocked out
From the truths of reality
Pretend that this world
Was together a society
And the haters and the hated
Always lived in harmony
And pretend the world
Was always at its best
With the organisms it watched
All were highly blessed
And at the times of the worse
The world held strong
Like a molecular structure
All of us were prongs
All of us needed
For this world to survive
Absent from murder, rape
And the cannabilistic strives
Now lets pretend that life
Was never wasted on drugs
That it is was never lost
Trying to fit in with the thugs
And that the world was one
Filled with joy and love
And no one looked back
But stared straight above
And the rule that was golden
Never was created
Due to the fact
That there was never a reason

Now lets pretend the worldIs different then what seems
Pretend that we never lost
Our oppurtunities
Pretned that this world
Wasn ruled by monarcys
And that we people never followed
Our obsecured dreams
And that this place never
Reached its height of insanity
Living its life
With out its moral calamities
And lets just imagine
This world was full of passion
The the idea of murder
Was never a question
Spare the thought of mind
Which chooses the choices u take
Cause reality isnt A place thats for the make
And listen to the elders
The wise and the aged
Because the best lesson in life
Is from the choices that were made
Just pretending our world
Was never gonna die
The idea of the apocolipse
Was never denied
The thoughts of the cripples
Were listened to an equal right
And the ideas of the young
Were brought up to positive design
With the abortions of the young
Forced to blood and murde
rAnd the older ones forced
To a youthinasia torture
Life is too sacredTo be wasted on hatred
And yet this world laughs
At the idea of plagerism
Now lets sit togethe
rPraying, seeing as one
Close your eyes and feelThe natural feeling of stun
And remember the changes
Through the seasons and the years
Cause soon the time will come
When they're a dull place full of tears
And now cover your fears
And just close yours eyes
See the perfect place
And pretend the world had no lies
And when hope seems lost
And the earth is coming still
Search back into your memories
And recite the words I spill
Now with a final pretend
To change the feelings we have
The fear of the Jews
And the evils which it had
And with the pearl harbor attack
And the massures it brought
Lets all hold together
Pretending life was no holocust
But pretending only gets uAs far as a dream
So the only real way to stop
Is to wake this fantasy
And when life disappears
From the face of the earth
Just close your eyes and rememberTo pretend it never hurt

Did you write this? Cause this is really good!

Yes sir I did, everything I post is original unless quoted. Thank you, didn't think I knew so much did you? my Grandma sure didn't , it was cool to see her reaction when she heard it.

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PostSubject: This is a random quick write posted on FB by me   Sun Sep 11, 2011 11:30 pm

Seems when your low theres no body to reach out for help,
Not when your lonely and cold and overwhelmed with doubt,
Only reactions you hold you keep to your own, not out loud,
Standing among the night crowds hight from loud vacation at-
Cloud nine hold your lighters up to the sky head up high and proud.
the future will be fine with your lyricist mind spittin sly-
Rhymes makin more than pennys and dimes you know your the-
Illest. why argue with the obvious signs? or are you oblivious,
If so its time you wake up and shine wont be there forever-
You can't rewind. once its past you, its behind for good.
Would you really throw away something youve strived and workd-
towards so good, endless nights being a perfectionist to be the best-
lyracist to ever spit. Sharpenin your mind to think lines up quick,
Trainin harder than rocky, failed once cause OCD.
I went insane train derailed, stepped up my game-
Began to rebuild, ran again.
Now everybody will listen full attention.

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